First Chapter Feedback

First Chapter Feedback editing service
First Chapter Feedback editing service
First Chapter Feedback editing service

Editing Inclusions

Although not exhaustive, this list gives an overview of the types of checks included in my editing services:
  • Inconsistency corrections
  • Story structure suggestions
  • Character voice distinguishability
  • Dialogue/speech punctuation adjustments 
  • Location(s)/world(s) relatability and/or plausibility
  • Plot flow observations and improvement suggestions
  • General readability and reader engagement suggestions
  • Formatting suggestions/confirmations (e.g. abbreviations, speech marks, slang/jargon, rogue spacing etc.)
  • Obvious spelling, punctuation and grammar corrections (although a final, dedicated proofread will be required before publication).

Price guideline: £11 – £13 per 1,000 words.


Frequently Asked Questions

Q. What software do you use for editing?

A. I use Track Changes in Word. This short video explains how Track Changes work.

Q. What levels of editing do you offer?

A. For full manuscripts, I offer both line editing (also known as copy editing) and developmental editing. This blog explains the differences between the two.

Q. Do you specialise in any particular genres, or are there any genres you don’t edit?

A. I work on a range of fiction novels, as well as nonfiction books, but being a crime fiction obsessive (both reading and writing), I know the styles, tropes and reader expectations of crime fiction (and its many sub-genres) extremely well. The darker themed genres I am more than happy to edit include:







Dark romance

Domestic noir

Murder mystery

Serial killer crime

Detective led crime

Psychological thriller

I am quite unshockable where a great story is concerned – often the grislier the better!

The only genre I don’t enjoy working on is epic fantasy (sorry epic fantasy authors!), but I would be happy to refer you to other editors in my professional network who do edit that genre.

Q. Do you offer payment plans for editing services?

A. Payment plans are definitely available. In fact, most of my author clients pay by instalments! The most popular choice seems to be half up front then half 14 days after completion, but I’ve agreed to instalments over two-three months before. I try and be as flexible as possible but I do ask for a 10% non-refundable deposit of the total cost to secure a booking, just so that I can be clear about my future editing availability.

Q. Do you offer package prices or discounts for booking editing, proofreading and formatting services altogether?

A. Package prices are available and are agreed on a project by project basis. Please contact me for a bespoke quote.